All Comments on 'Unexpected Common Interests'

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My Erotic TaleMy Erotic Taleover 18 years ago
surprise

a situation I would not have retold but then again it may just be a thought...a poem about interests....interesting

LeBrozLeBrozover 18 years ago
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Now that's a fantasy that's even hotter when real...

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
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Not bad, but the meter and flow need to be worked on.

I think you should've kept to the same structure throughout. It was a kind of sloppy ending. To quick to submit. Slow down a bit.

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