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Paul
I love the fact that after all this he has NO kids of his own!
He's going to live the rest of his sorry life a lonely, lonely old man.
I DONT KNOW OF ANY BOOK
that says a teacher is supposed to be wise as Solomon. TK U MLJ LV NV
DG Here or is it DG Hear?
Did you Here, Hear? Or, did you Hear, Here?
You're (or is it your?) not the only author that needs to fire their (Or is it they're? Maybe there?) editor. Do you guys ever re-read your stories? You, as an author are fairly good with your ideas and story concepts. But when you can't pay attention to the spelling of just simple words that should have been learned in the 3rd grade, you make it hard for us 5th graders to understand what you are trying to get across to us. Pay your editor more or fire the fucker. Both or either would make an improvement.
Don't do it George
Don't ask her out on a date! You'll regret it for the rest of your miserable life.
I like It
All the assholes got theirs in the end. Fuck them all.
Ugh....
She is incredibly disgusting and so is every one of her friends.
good story
and it is typical of todays society. I always thought I was born too late, oh well. I think it's all about moving on, but what do I know.
This started out a good story until...
...Until the last part of the last chapter and this one! It got to sappy concerning the kids! Had I been one of the kids, I'd have laid into her good and told her I never wanted to see her again! She was a slut! Accepting a marriage proposal from a man she didn't love was appalling but staying with him and treating him like she did was worse. She should have lost everything, including her family!
Of course, he was no better, going outside of his marriage to find sexual gratification!
He should have confronted her early on and gotten it straightened out and got the divorce then!
OK story, shame about the spelling.
The story flowed nicely but the dreadful spelling grated frequently.
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