by backdoor2
What in gods name has that got to do with Loving Wives. Sick
At least forewarned by the description I only had to endure the first and last paragraph to know it was another BDSM/Submissive Wimp story.
If the writer wants better scores put it in the right category where people whom like that kind of thing will read it and vote accordingly.
Wrong catagory - this belonged in Gay BDSM subsection wimp likes cock.
You really didn't think this was erotic did you? You did? Where - what scene? The whole thing was intended to bruise him and our sensibilities.
Look get the dictionary out little sick one - you can do that right. Look up ludicrous, erotic, sensual, disrespect, - now when you look up absurdly humiliated or pathetic or demeaned you should see your picture - yah u liddle sick one.
Now then, none of that or this entitles you to think that you are a writer. A writer puts forth effort, has imagination and a relatively strong sense of acceptable within the framework of posible to shape the story. Reread your story for reasons not to continue! Your baby was either ugly as you deigned or worse than you could conceive!
Don't you know any basic english. There, I lyed on the bed, as....It's LAY on the bed.. I think all you wimp ass fuckers are furiners..meaning not Amuricans...
d.brereton@hotmail.co.uk very very good never been sooooo turned on
While still tied to the bedposts, the stranger got up and stuck his dick in my wife's ass???? Wasn't that bed kind of heavy? Also, wouldn't that lye down on the bed burn his back?
Willing cuckoldry always gets a "one star" rating. It is what it is.
Once the stranger's cock entters the husband' s mouth, it's gay male, NOT LOVING WIVES!
ZERO for LW, not rated for gay male, as I'm happily a heterosexual male!