I have been following this storyline along from Ch.01 ,this story has been getting better with each successive chapter, I hope to read more before the season is over.
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10/10/05
N2 you
are a romantic at heart and a beautiful writer. Keep up the good work anf great luck on the contest. You have my vote.
Well written and creative but not ghosts just 2 disembodied spirits that somehow never made their final journey. But you got to tell us what was happening 2 weeks later with your characters.
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hope to read more
I have been following this storyline along from Ch.01 ,this story has been getting better with each successive chapter, I hope to read more before the season is over.
N2 you
are a romantic at heart and a beautiful writer. Keep up the good work anf great luck on the contest. You have my vote.
Danielle
love tis one
I thought the 3rd chapter was kinda sucky, but you redeemed yourself (in my eyes, of course) with this one. Good luck with your next stories, n2
Not!
You had me until chapter four. WHAT THE?!?! I suppose this was meant for readers that are into incest.
Haunted Halos
Well written and creative but not ghosts just 2 disembodied spirits that somehow never made their final journey. But you got to tell us what was happening 2 weeks later with your characters.
continue the story
more about dave and jennie please
where's the rest of the story?
What happens when they wake-up and/or do they wake-up ?
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