As the previous comment suckded worstest and baddest - this story didn't involve cheating or cuckolding but surprise surprise a married couple - how unique here - also well written in an erotic and sensual manner - nice clean marital work author - we liked it!!!
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Anonymous10/22/05
Completely agree with the 2nd commentor...
the 1st one was an UNEDUCATED JERK to put it nicely, this story was a refreshing change from the usual dissatisfied, cheating spouses; two married people that actually loved and wanted EACH OTHER, how novel! Seriously, it was a very nice read.
I see from the date that this was your first offering. Well forget what that first asshole said, this was really good, quite exceptional in fact. You took an extremely 'loving' wife, ready to go all the way to give her adored husband a birthday that he could never forget and turn it into one of the sweetest, romantic love stories that this 'old man' has read on LITEROTICA! Please tell us about their exchange of Christmas presents.
is a married man, let me tel you that is a great birthday wish story. it is real, an believible.
keep up the great work.
((((((((( k ))))))))))))))))
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Anonymous08/18/07
Perfect
Well imagined story.
Very erotic and sweet.
Flawless, transperant, and vivid writing style.
Keep writing like this and you can ignore the criticism, from here on out.
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this sux!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1
this was a very boring storie!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Correction Is In Order
As the previous comment suckded worstest and baddest - this story didn't involve cheating or cuckolding but surprise surprise a married couple - how unique here - also well written in an erotic and sensual manner - nice clean marital work author - we liked it!!!
Completely agree with the 2nd commentor...
the 1st one was an UNEDUCATED JERK to put it nicely, this story was a refreshing change from the usual dissatisfied, cheating spouses; two married people that actually loved and wanted EACH OTHER, how novel! Seriously, it was a very nice read.
This was a really good tale !!!!
I see from the date that this was your first offering. Well forget what that first asshole said, this was really good, quite exceptional in fact. You took an extremely 'loving' wife, ready to go all the way to give her adored husband a birthday that he could never forget and turn it into one of the sweetest, romantic love stories that this 'old man' has read on LITEROTICA! Please tell us about their exchange of Christmas presents.
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is a married man, let me tel you that is a great birthday wish story. it is real, an believible.
keep up the great work.
((((((((( k ))))))))))))))))
Perfect
Well imagined story.
Very erotic and sweet.
Flawless, transperant, and vivid writing style.
Keep writing like this and you can ignore the criticism, from here on out.
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