concise, intense, great description! A winner, good luck!
Gory, I love a good halloween story. Nice job, good luck with the contest.
Great story did enjoy it an awful lot. Correct spelling of the holiday is Samhain though the it is pronounced sow en.
You tricked me! Here I thought he was going to take her with him and make her his lover forever and then he killed her. So much for a romance lol I liked it though, your descriptions were absolutely fantastic.
A wicked turn of events! Lovingly and gracefully written, and full of beautiful atmosphere. I was truly sorry it all ended so badly.
There should be more! I want more! Who is this creature? Please write a second part. You're a gifted writer. I've enjoyed your stories.
You scared me.
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very well written
concise, intense, great description! A winner, good luck!
Very
Gory, I love a good halloween story. Nice job, good luck with the contest.
Enjoyed it
Great story did enjoy it an awful lot.
Correct spelling of the holiday is Samhain though the it is pronounced sow en.
Good job :)
You tricked me! Here I thought he was going to take her with him and make her his lover forever and then he killed her. So much for a romance lol
I liked it though, your descriptions were absolutely fantastic.
Fairies Behaving Badly
A wicked turn of events!
Lovingly and gracefully written, and full of beautiful atmosphere. I was truly sorry it all ended so badly.
great
There should be more! I want more! Who is this creature? Please write a second part. You're a gifted writer. I've enjoyed your stories.
Yikes
You scared me.
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