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Loved it!
Great Read!! One of my favorite entries!! Good Luck!
Outstanding and you fooled me
I'd expected a vampire not a what 'appeared' at the end. A very nice twist.. *G
PP
Halloween
To bad Halloween only comes around once a year.
I loved it
Great luck on the contest, you get my vote...
Absolutely SMASHING!!
Very, VERY well done my dear! I loved the 'twist' at the end... not at all what I was expecting!
Good luck!
Great Story!
Loved the story, especially the ending!
magnificent
what a very interesting and sensual story and a very very intreging ending I love the story it is a beautiful co-write very well penned you two bravo hope to read more stories authored by you two
bear
Hope you become more than a Holiday writer here
While I have read other stories in here along the same theme, yours was extremely well written. It more than made up for any redundancy. I hope you write some more stories on this site.
good luck
Mixed feelings about this one I would have liked to see the action (sex and horror) blended together instead of one after the other, a taste of each in the same arena, A blind alley or two before leading the reader down the path of destruction.
good job
It was what I expected from you, twisted at the end. The part I wasn't sure about was HOW it would be twisted. Always fun to read your writing.
A Body to Die For
Nice twist! I get so tired of this overused phrase. Now you've made it the theme of a story - much better! Looking forward to reading more.
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Wow. You gave me a 5-minute erection (minimum!) that sprang up so fast it practically made a sound . . . and I never even had to touch myself! The great thing was how quickly you got it to melt down again when she transformed. Nicely done. You clearly have an effect on the men and women of Lit . . . it's a pleasure to be one of them. Keep up the great work.
DAMN...that was..
Wickedly good.. You have done a fine job of the macabre...The best of luck on your story!
Delicous
What a deliciously wonderful story.
Hot
Great twist :D Quite the play on a succubus.
Exciting story ;)
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