The Affair Ch. 02

What pap

First of all, use a grammar checker. You've got so many typos in this that it's rediculous.

Secondly, no police officer would ever believe that story. If you want to make a man and woman look stupid, that's one thing, but don't insult peace officers.

Thirdly, it's a really stupid story. You'll never get to Hollywood with this crap.

What a twat, adamgunn

maybe you should have spell checked your own response before making such a ridiculous (not 'rediculous!) statement.

I suspect you would be hard pressed to write anything worth reading yourself, just as I doubt that many of the better writers on literotica would expect to have Hollywood take up their stories. Anyway it would be hard to write poorer stuff than, say, the screenplay of Avatar.

As far as the police officers are concerned, I would be surprised if a case like that would get more than a perfunctory examination before the file was closed - they usually have far too much on their plates to dig too deep into what seems to be a straightforward killing of an uninvited rapist in someone's home caught in the act.

I found the story fairly well crafted and thought provoking, if rather sad and disturbing at the end

I Thought it Was A Happy Ending!

I just don't understand why Chuck needed to kill himself.

Not all good stories are happy ones.

This was a dark tale from beginning to end, but it was, oh, so true to life. Having spent a lifetime in law enforcement, I have observed more human tragedy than I ever want to remember. Apparently, you have your own observances of life that allow you to tell such real-life stories. Thank you, D.G. for all of your stories. I haven't read a bad one yet.

a good true to life story

that is what i like about the story whether 1 or 2 but i think the only reason he didn't kill her was because he still loved her a little bit even after all that she did. and if you people have time to worry about some miss spelled words of the story then it didn't grab your attention enough plus this is one of the stories that is probably close to real life the cops believing the story the husband and wife came up with is up to debate

good twist

There is often two sides to a story. Both parties can feel wronged and be wrong at the same time. I can see you playing the reader with the usual lines "21 years of marriage" and "second chance" and the husband running away, but then showing the other side of the coin that all the presumed affair was not even real!

He was an idiot for disrespecting his wife by showing her privates to the world, and especially on demand from a friend of his. Exhibitionism might be okay from a distance in front of strangers, but this? What a rocky road. They never even talked about their experiences and their desires except whilst in heat.

She was wrong for lying that one time instead of admitting the truth and telling her side of the story sooner. I really can't blame her though, because that's what you call fate, and you can't really escape it, even if it's not your fault or doing for the greater part! It's like a child who thinks he/she never asked to be born into an ugly world. There's a lot of unhappiness in the world and too many people say "they deserve it" instead of trying to help or even listen. She was not even a slut - she was a defenceless woman, and unable to fight back against a stronger man who DID force sex onto her.

Behind the mask a lot of women wear, they are really weak and vulnerable. You might not believe this, and instead prefer to poke and jeer at some of the really bitchy women in the world, but trust me, they are weak and human, and some of them are only like that because other people made them like that, and they like to think they're innocent - as we all do. Few of us like to believe we're evil. Even bad guys want to feel they're the real good guys, just driven by circumstances to look bad. Even some party girls have a lot of sadness in their eyes. Sometimes there is more than meets the eye. I'm not saying some people don't deserve to be punished - but this widow certainly didn't deserve it; for what? One lie? Children and spouses lie all the time because they fear the alternative answer will get them in more trouble even if it's not all their fault that the situation came to this.

They (husband and wife) are both only partly to blame because the situation was bigger than they could handle in the end. There is really nothing that you can do. They both took a chance to make their sex lives better, he took a stupid chance to show his friend his wife's pussy, and she took a woeful chance to lie to her husband .. In hindsight it was all wrong - but when you live the life you will always be thinking of your chances, and it will be at around 50-50 what you do and what will happen. The person I feel for most is the widow. Lie or don't lie, and be forgiven or tossed out in the heap. What a horrible life.

and she became joan rivers

her husband ended his life in a similar way, but the same reason?
The hell she created was hers and should live long enough to feel the contempt attached with it. And even have unreal procedures and haughtyness and a life that gets no better.

Rough Story

I didn't say it was bad. It is harsh.

I gave it 5 stars ...

... cheating just destorys everything.

Nice work -

That one carries an impressive message and a very real possibility- she had no self control or apparently self respect so everyone else pays. She was apparently a submissive who never understood it - maybe now she can grow up -

more pussies at work

the only person that go fucked in this story was Chuck, his dead for loving a slut assed whore. He should have killed that bitch to.

I love suicide stories!

Killing yourself is the one victory they can't take away.

Had Enough

There are a lot of middle aged men out there who have busted their asses for 30 years and done their jobs as loyal husbands and fathers. They have given everything they could earn to their families and put off their own desires for those years. Many of those desires never to be fulfilled. By the time the kids are out on their own these men really do not have much of their own to show for their lives. Few hobbies, few friends, an aging body and usually a wife who has come to take her husbands efforts for granted. Usually she has next to no interest in him sexually. All this a good man can accept and deal with because he is "doing his job" fulfilling his role. Turn him into a chump, and reap the whirlwind.

I hope this woman is miserable the rest of her life.

She fucked around on him once before, according to her story then fucked Mark and then fucked Mark again. All these sluts say (after getting caught) "This was going to be our last time, I was going to tell him" or "I had already told him". Now she is feeling bad but she can console herself that she can fuck anyone she wants to now. I hope she is miserable and gets AIDS. Or kills herself. Yes, I know that it is just a story but things like this actually have happened and will continue to happen. I am not excusing men that stray or bring home diseases. They are guilty, too. L

Hard Story!

It was hard to read, however Chuck showed himself as a person of substance.
He just made one mistake: he should have emptied his gun into slut/wife too.
Then, the real justice would be done and hell with the "justice" system we have today

kingdong2

There's no piece of ass in the world worth killing any one over. This world is full of pussy walking around and can be had with a little effort.

Thanks for the offering.

Ouch

Don't cheat.
Everyone gets hurt.
Or dies.

I wish Chuck had killed her too

No woman is worth dying for. Certainly not some lying cheating slut.

for a minute there.....

I thought Susan was going to pull out a gun and kill Linda. And then that would leave it up to Becky to kill Susan. "You DIE! She DIES! Everybody DIES!" (a quote from a very old movie- "Heavy Metal"). Well, to actually critique this story, what was glossed over was Linda's feelings about the exhibitionism. Linda didn't relate enough about the games that led up to getting involved with Mark. Also, she relates her grief after the deaths and has her OBVIOUS regrets, but as she is telling the story, she doesn't seem to have too many regrets about the affair years earlier, or about all of the flirtation with Mark, BEFORE Chuck ever meets him and Susan. If she had felt strongly that being with Mark was a mistake, she could have avoided him, and counseled Chuck to drop going out with them as couples. As a character, she hasn't been able to admit to herself, that fucking around behind Chuck's back IS exactly what she wanted. So many stories use the old cliché's about what cheaters say after getting caught. In Linda's version of events, she claims that her vocal "encouragement" to Mark was to get him to be done faster, and to get it over with. But it makes no sense, when she also tells the readers that she was planning to break it off with him. If that HAD been true, why wouldn't she start to criticize Mark, to show him that she wasn't interested in continuing? Why not turn him OFF instead of turning him ON? In these stories, it always seems like AFTER getting caught, the cheating slut wife wants to claim that the shit she says in the heat of passion doesn't mean anything. Then why say anything at all? Does she think she is getting one over on her lover? She already gave up the pussy, isn't that enough to stroke the guy's ego? And what does she say in the throe's of passion with hubby? In the case of this story, it was ALSO bullshit fantasy stuff. So, again, why say anything at all? These are the same deceitful women that fake orgasms, and then wonder why the "spark" is starting to fade, and seek to add "spice". If these bitches could be honest with themselves AND their partners, first and foremost, it would amaze them at how fast things could improve. Anyway, good story DG, and thanks for inspiring a rant! :)

The husband was already crazy before his wife cheated.

She cheated so he commits suicide? He had nothing else to live for? This guy was already crazy before she cheated. No one goes from having a happy life to committing suicide in a span of 3 days. Either he had other issues going on or he was so co-dependant on his wife that his life was nothing if she wasn't his. The real losers in this story are Susan and Becky. They were innocent in all of this. People who were praising the cowardly husband for ruining his reputation need to remember that this guy isn't even around to feel the sting of it. His poor wife who did nothing wrong has to life with it, along with this guy's kids. How's that for revenge?

Why Did This All Happen?

Cuz DG Hear says "I Seen" so damn much!

NIce!

But no women is worth dying over in anger. To save a woman's life, yes. But not in revenge.

Gave you three stars...

...but, honestly, this one is surely not your usual standard.

Couple Of Thoughts

The first time she was with Mark he gets her to show him her pussy because she showed it to the old guy. Her answer there should have been that she was with her HUSBAND and he encouraged it,

And why, why, WHY, when they are supposedly going to end things, do these women decide they need to give the guy another ride? If you're going to end it, END IT!

No character

Linda had no character or integrity so she was always going to lie about the murder. The entire marriage was a lie nearly from the start so no surprises there. The only tragedy here is that she did not get justice visited upon her.

Cardboard Characters

Unbelievably bad! Just give up writing...

Only a fool

Will kill because his wife cheats. Why sacrifice the chance to enter God's kingdom by killing yourself. Nothing is worth the chance to live forever in paradise!

@ifeanyi

Don't worry about your immortal soul! The traditional punishment for adultery is death! So morally, if not legally it is okay to kill adulterers! It is in the Bible and the Koran, so all the bases are covered!

THE SHIT CONTINUES

Posthumously. TK U MLJ LV NV

Chuck was big-time stupid

And Linda was a first class slut and as stupid as Chuck. Mark got what he deserved for screwing a married woman.

She made out like a bandit, didn't she

Her cheating is safely hidden behind a false rape charge, and the only two other people that know the truth, are in the ground. Everyone sees her as the 'poor rape victim' and as 'the poor widow'. Not only that, but her husband's suicide is safely concealed in 'misplaced' police paperwork, so she gets richer with the insurance too. She may not have pulled the trigger, or driven the car over the cliff, but she more or less got away with murder, nonetheless. She was every bit as responsible for her husband's actions, as he was!

Okay story telling I guess.

But that was just harsh. Not really fun to read.

Ouch...

Harsh but realistic.

There is a lot of real life violence associated with infidelity.

One of my best friends took his life years ago over his wife cheating on him more than once.

He left behind a beautiful little girl. I hope she dies slowly for what she did to him.

Not the healthiest outlook but I can't help my emotions about the bitch.

good story

and indeed it is. very realistic. I am surprised he didn't get caught, but then again, there was no time to actually figure it out, before he killed himself.

Very Realistic

It shows an understanding of the extended consequences of an affair.

All too often people start these things thinking that they will never get caught or that no one will get hurt.

Someone always gets hurt by these things and the majority of cheating spouses get caught.

Good story, well done.

SHOULD HAVE KILLED HER FIRST

before killing himself...cheating whores are just that...the lowest of the low...

Cheating

The story illustrates what can be dire resulting from the infidelity, it often isn't worth the risk.

Names...

Chuck was a Wimp, a Cuckold and a Coward. He cried in his car instead of stopping Mark and Linda in the kitchen, didn't even get any video on his Iphony (where is Stang when you need him?), just let Linda skate. He was a cuckold long before Mark and cried when he found out instead of taking positive action, the very definition of a cuck. Then he took the Cowards way out. Just a sad little man, who lived a sad little life, till he lost what little he had.

A very

Sobering story, could be true too. I have lived through, not me but friends and relatives who have killed themselves in different ways l.....bill


5ssss.....good story, wonder if anyone will take heed...

A couple of bucks

for a pocket dictionary would have made this piece more more interesting and less distracting. What is "head of heals", what does it mean?