All Comments on 'First Time Nude in Public'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
lame.........................

this was one of the lamest most boring stories I've ever read.............the only thing it got up was my blood pressure for wasting my time reading it................

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
I'm sorry, I have to agree with the other person

commenting. The story jumped around, brought in subjects that had nothing to do with the main premis, had spelling errors and grammatical errors. And where is the incest in all of this? Keep trying but get yourself an editor

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Three strikes -- you're out..

Terrible story... I would suggest you go back to your day job..a writer you will never make.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 18 years ago
Great storie idea

I loved the story idea....the writing needs work....but the story is great.

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
Gun???

You expect me to beleive that ? the story was great but you should have walked in to your b day party naked an d ended it there the gun bullshit was stupid are you even 18 yet ?

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
alright...

it was an alright story and it wasnt ment to have incest in it, it was "Taboo" for Exhibitionism

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
n/a

Not a good story

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Nice combination of innocence and building anticipation

Very nice story

Rapier875Rapier875over 4 years ago
Is that it ?

I'm not if this was a story, or just the introduction.

But it's all a bit confusing.......

NudistDavidNudistDavidover 1 year ago

Another very nice story! Don't mind the detractors ... Everyone just wants sex, sex, sex! I am also a nudist and exhibitionist ... But I know how to act, given the situation ... Once, I and a girlfriend went to a TGIF Fridays for a few drinks ... After a couple of beers, we decided to try Long Island Ice Teas ... They didn't have much of an effect on me, but my girlfriend got wasted ... They went straight to her head ... I had to practically carry her out to the car ... When I got her inside, she peed herself completely! So, I stripped her soaking pants off and drove home ... I carried her inside, and realized everything else was wet too ... So I stripped her naked, and laid down next to her in silk shorts and a t-shirt until she came to. I got her revived, and she went home ... Things like that happen occasionally ... We had great sex the next day!

NudistDavidNudistDavidover 1 year ago

I forgot to say that I do hope you write more about your experiences!

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