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excellent....
I especially was taken by the last three lines.
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Sound principle made beautiful by your words. Excellent. I have a new favorite.
Very nice
Simple and relatively clean sentiment. I enjoyed it.
Fly
first time
I have read any of your work...it resonates very well with mine...scary thing seem to have a lot in common even same name...lovely images in this I will read more of your work in future...NeVer ThirsT.../bluerains
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An inspirational read.
A BEAUTIFUL ......
example of what limits
one will take,
but take none from my love,
for there is no
sacrificing that,
it is all or none.
very moving!
-sGp-
Very Nice ~
I like this sweet sexy lil poem.
Just sneaks up on ya and tingles
along the heart. Sweet ...
More Plez~
Oh God
Can someone give me a drool pot. I need to spit. This kind of sap makes me want to run to the nearest toilet and hurl.
Not.
I'm not really good at reading poetry. My brain's a little too analytical and ordered, I think. I kinda liked it, but I don't have a good frame of mind to really get into it.
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