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just luv
this last line...my passion glows
like coals
on fire forever
for you.
builds a bonfire in me engine...[winks] blue
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Your poem was mentioned in today's reviews.
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I like your bits of self-conversation inserted in the poem, showing your reflection as you write.
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love this!
comments on the creation of art! Quite novel and successful!!
That last stanza rocks !!!
I love it !!!
I feel the build up, then you stick it to us
... good n naughty. Like a house on fire
with no way to put it out. Just a hot lil poem !!
I love your writing,
give me more !!! * Grins *
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Despite protestations to the contrary
It felt like it devolved into an emotional train wreck.
Mysterious overflow...
Passion endures ~ no way to turn it off ~ it's on burning like coals - on fire forever.
I’m available -- just not for you
My skin is flayed
every nerve
raw
exposed
to you
don’t touch
please don’t touch me
as long as I can recall
i’ve always felt this way
contageous
unclean
Dirtified in
your presence
dirtified by
ur lack of presence
Im available
but not for you
im available
but not
im unavailable
at all
Jesus Christ alone
can’t save me
its all there
a thousands years
living under
a millenia of sins
nerves are raw
and i feel ur thoughts
pressing deep
Youve dirtified my mind
i knew it all along
dirtified my soul
with your burning
Im not here
unavailable
to your touch
I’m available
but not for you
your love
SOMEONE STOLE THE HANDLE
and hid the key. TK U MLJ LV NV
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