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now that is creepy.......
bone chilling and blood curdling, and very much in the spirit of the contest! Good luck!
Damn Ogg
Where do you dream this shit up at? It's fantastic, creepy and sick. I loved it.
You rule!
Fantastic Ogg! Could well be the most original thing I've seen on this site.
Oh Yeah!
There is a dimension...a dimension in which Rod Serling can be reincarnated as Oggbashan. It is truly a wonderful place.
Gotta agree
that was a real dark, scary tale...
~Honey
Whew!
I agree with Danielle ... where do you get your ideas? You need to donate your brain to science Ogg; it definitely needs to be examined! Good luck!
Cookie :)
Twisted Tale!
Rosemary's Baby meets the The Cask of Amontillado??? Wow, Og... can I just say, you rock? :) Bizarre, twisted, strange and delightfully original. Glad this made it into the contest, good luck!
What a story!
The originality is astounding. Creepy too.
Creepy.
I think I'll have nightmares for the next few days.
Wow, nicely written. Sad and creepy.
Wow, I was sucked into the story. I felt saddenss, wonder and scared. Nicely written.
Bizarre and Original
If Og weren't such a gentleman, he would be a truly terrifying individual. Probably the most fearless erotic imagination on the site, and all told with such grace and open goodwill.
Reading this is like coming across your favorite uncle dressed in stockings and high heels and brandishing a whip. Well done!
Whew... wow!
Weird & wonderful! Really imaginative...
I had an absolute blast reading it!!
Another
creepy idea :) I wish you would have told us the outcome though, I was kinda rooting for Nick :p
Fabulous!
Og, that was creepy brilliant!!!
Fusionnee (Abs and Vana)
Like all your stories.
Hello I have enjoyed all your stories. I would maybe like to suggest one based on your partner story. Maybe one with something known as the Three Graces. Where instead of just one partner the three graces would surround and envelope their prey as they are inflated, or something alnog them being caught similar to the spiderwoman .
rtpoetker@gmail.com
:-)
ooh!
Like a twisted, erotic ode to Bradbury. Delightful.
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