All Comments on 'Freddy and Lara'

by Sean Renaud

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sacksackover 18 years ago
neat little story...

and not a word wasted! Good luck!

cookiejarcookiejarover 18 years ago
Short and compact

There were a few errors but it didn't detract from the story. Good luck!

Cookie :)

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Fantastic little

fantasy...Lara Croft with a nine inch cock...that would be my nightmare.

AliyahlovinsexAliyahlovinsexover 18 years ago
:)

I liked the twist of Lara being a man. Not the category I would usually read, but it was new and exciting :) Good luck.

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