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by My Erotic Tale10/11/05

the quest

dancing with thoughts of where your going while dragging the anchor across where you have been trying to flap your wings while weighted down then fell in the water and nearly drowned. "Help!" is cried out while poeticly helpless.

inspirational write

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by My Erotic Tale10/11/05

ooooppppsss I ment.....

dancing with thoughts of where your going while dragging the anchor across where you have been trying to flap your wings while weighted down then fell in the water and nearly drowned. "Help!" is cried out while poeticly helpless.

inspirational write

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