Two people finding each other and knowing it immediately. Pleasureable sex that shows each other caring and respect. Thanks. Phil
Very well written and a great read. Thank You. Ronnie W.
I like your first story ! Go ahead.
Though a trifle too fast-paced. That's Ok for a 1st story though!
No wasted words in this short but full story! A wonderfully happy blend of romance and sex,with the "love at first sight" theme continually lifting the story to a magical place.
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Very Nicely Done
Two people finding each other and knowing it immediately.
Pleasureable sex that shows each other caring and respect.
Thanks.
Phil
a nice gentle erotic romance
Very well written and a great read. Thank You. Ronnie W.
Pleasant Story
I like your first story !
Go ahead.
Very well done...
Though a trifle too fast-paced.
That's Ok for a 1st story though!
Outstanding!
No wasted words in this short but full story! A wonderfully happy blend of romance and sex,with the "love at first sight" theme continually lifting the story to a magical place.
Click here to leave your own comment on this submission! or
Back to Love at First Sight or
More submissions by marriedbuthoping.