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Fisherman's Will

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by Anonymous

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by twelveoone10/11/05

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not bad, despite being disorganised, and forced thyme
but just average

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by Anonymous10/11/05

dang et

U R sounding like John now...scarry...he could have written this one ...with exception of the catfish.. ...he wants his body cast into the sea...to be recycled too...nice pen...blue

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by LeBroz10/11/05

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A fun piece ~ now let's see what happens;
I've a vision of a last lake for fishermen...

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