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The moral of the story?
Be careful what you wish for; you just might get it ... in spades. Very nice work. Good luck!
Cookie :)
I'll be careful when casting spells....
....esp. on Samhain. Loved the story. You should write more often Moonie. Luck.~Tinkerbell.
True love
does not always win, huh? A good story, but I would have liked a bit more fight from a sorceress. But who am I? LOL
Good luck.
Black Tulip
That was a fun read
A nice, spooky read, elf. You did an especially good job of quickly setting the mood and place.
Rumple
a pleasure to read...
it's hard to write about fictional characters like this, but you succeeded. Good luck in the contest!
Interesting
I loved the story just wish it were a little longer.
Spooky and Creepy
But needs some editing. I enjoyed the story but it would read better with different structuring of your sentences.
Warning
A spledid cautionary tale of lost love in the hands of someone with the power to erase the loss. Strong feelings in a very short period of time, enjoyable.
Very nice!
Good story, elfie....I enjoyed it immensely....please do write more.
Magical
I enjoyed the tale you spun in your story! More...more!!
~Honey
Creepy piece of work
Well written and quite disturbing.
And letting out an evil little laugh about the climax. The universe is ordered a particular way, and trying to break the rules has unpleasant consequences.
Well done.
Enchanting
Nice tale, imaginative.
loved it
Love has a strange way of clouding reason and making people forget everything else. That definitely came out in your story, and even though her task was nearly impossible and risky, she attempted it in the name of love. Chilling, but I agree with Black Tulip (I think) I would have enjoyed a longer story with a bit of fight from Ceara. But for what it was, it was great :D
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