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Heat Ch. 01

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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous10/17/05

OMG I LOVED IT!

That was so erotic! I wanted to be her!

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by Anonymous10/17/05

Wow!!

i loved every second of it....in one word....Amazing!!!

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by Chainzz10/19/05

Very hot dollface !

Hiya gorgeous ...
was paging thru some things and found your stories . I didnt even realize you were a writer . Nice work here , was on the edge of my chair all the way thru !
Off to go find more then ...
kisses sexy ..
Chainz

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by Anonymous10/27/05

Animal HEAT

VERY hot EA! Quite extraordinary animal lust in that story. Can't wait to read the next chapter.

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by Anonymous04/22/06

Fucking hot!

OH my... after reading this story I want to call my bf and tell him to take me... lol... good job!!

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by Anonymous07/13/06

Amazing

Absolutely... wonderfully fast and passionate description of how sex between a dominant male lycanthrope and a female in heat would be... you are truly gifted in your vision

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by kittyhawk55504/10/10

Nice work

Enjoyed the story, but the spelling mistakes are distracting...

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by Anonymous04/10/11

Dry opinion

Passionate and awkward .

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by justme71306/16/11

That was good!

I guess the neighbors care! Love it so far!

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by kuroukiphoenyx07/29/11

if you were the the police that walked in

What would your reaction be :)

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by quiesincaelis10/06/11

Of course he loves her

How can there be any doubt? He loves her! She's his mate, period!
Nobody breaks down the door and risks prison for the woman they don't love. They just call replacement if they don't care. C'est l'amur!

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by Alpha_Marm10/30/11

A hot coupling to be sure

Damn that was smokin' hot monkey lovin'....uuuuuuuuuummmmhummm... yummy

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