Needs more plot line too quick of a story. It could have gone a lot further in so many directions, brother could have liked it and the two keep a secret affair up, someone could have walked in and turned the entire party into a swing party, brother could have turned little bro into sex slave..........so many options. Very dissapointing ending.
Was it just me? Or was this for the Halloween contest? I only saw the word Halloween in the story one time, and um..sorry, normally I don't say negative things in feedback, so I'll stop here.
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Anonymous07/27/12
Wow
That was hot, would live to see it!
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Anonymous03/12/13
a great story by a gifted author
Tony's a big good-looking stud, who likes getting his big prick sucked off. His brother John's slightly built, and has a thing about Tony's big prick. John fools Tony into sticking his prick in his mouth and blowing his balls down his little brother's mouth, then Tony, big aggressive guy that he is, sticks his stiff dick up John's little "twat," shooting another big load of creamy semen up his brother's ass. Tony discovers the truth, but I think the big guy won't be able to resist revisiting his brother's mouth and asshole, do you?
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Anonymous01/27/14
Can the story continue?
I'm awaiting another chapter -- perhaps one that shows Tony naked with his hairy chest all sweaty and damp as he fucks his brother again -- this time knowing it is John. And John can do all sorts of tricks with his mouth and tongue to make Tony cry out in his orgasm! Make the more masculine and muscular Tony more manly -- give him a healthy hairy chest!
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Needs more plot line too quick of a story. It could have gone a lot further in so many directions, brother could have liked it and the two keep a secret affair up, someone could have walked in and turned the entire party into a swing party, brother could have turned little bro into sex slave..........so many options. Very dissapointing ending.
where's the rest?
Way too abrupt. Is this the first of a series?
Fantastic
start n2, add to it now...
Um...
Was it just me? Or was this for the Halloween contest? I only saw the word Halloween in the story one time, and um..sorry, normally I don't say negative things in feedback, so I'll stop here.
Wow
That was hot, would live to see it!
a great story by a gifted author
Tony's a big good-looking stud, who likes getting his big prick sucked off. His brother John's slightly built, and has a thing about Tony's big prick. John fools Tony into sticking his prick in his mouth and blowing his balls down his little brother's mouth, then Tony, big aggressive guy that he is, sticks his stiff dick up John's little "twat," shooting another big load of creamy semen up his brother's ass. Tony discovers the truth, but I think the big guy won't be able to resist revisiting his brother's mouth and asshole, do you?
Can the story continue?
I'm awaiting another chapter -- perhaps one that shows Tony naked with his hairy chest all sweaty and damp as he fucks his brother again -- this time knowing it is John. And John can do all sorts of tricks with his mouth and tongue to make Tony cry out in his orgasm! Make the more masculine and muscular Tony more manly -- give him a healthy hairy chest!
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