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I liked this a lot. I probably would've taken out the last "that", but it's yours, and just my opinion. Thank you for sharing. I hope to do the same soon. :)
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Ohhhh, you are good; and Gaelic no less!
your poems are always worth reading.....
not sure what you meant by "granite eyes", but the other word painting was masterly!
I LOVE....
the thought you lead
others to, nothing short
about it ...
this was AWESOME..
and powerful !
-sGp-
Superb!
A superb poem. It has so much feeling in so few words...awesome
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Let me see through granite eyes ~ that life's meaning may be more clear.
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