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Chasing Blue Feathers

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by Anonymous

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by Leviluv10/12/05

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its wisdom
to the heart that
believes...
eternity is a breath
away.

Excellent!

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by Anonymous10/12/05

smooth

Rhythm comes easy to you. Good words choices here.
sandspike

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by cymry10/12/05

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Simply lovely.

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by LeBroz10/12/05

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A softly warming sound. Well done.

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by My Erotic Tale10/13/05

MLP~

I would read it again and again, a wonderful journey of words laid upon by bluerain.

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by sack10/13/05

"eternity is a breath away"

Thank you for providing us with that breath!

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by sweet GA peaches10/13/05

AWE'd ...

at your spellbound work,
leaving me .. breathless,
and aiming in phlight,
of the lift from the
feather blue'd.

sGp

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by RhymeFairy10/22/05

MMM .. Sensual an dreamy~

that beauty whispers
its wisdom
to the heart that
believes...

Gotta love those lines.
I want to go here with you
on your next trip, Pleezz~!!!
*grins n winks*

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