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All Comments on 'One Time Is an Accident'

by Tonyjoe

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AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Interesting story

Well written. The sex scene with the neighbor was great.

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Bullshit

A real shit story. You asshole writer need to come with something better than "what happens in Vegas..."

Silenus636Silenus636about 11 years ago
Pause, Why?

For fresh perspective: A+! Great so far. Maybe break it into chapters? More, definitely more!

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