All Comments on 'Sharizade'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Beautiful!

This is a gorgeous twist on the tale of the Arabian Nights! Well done! Sharizade seemed absolutely lovable!

31133113about 18 years ago
Cool idea!

Liked this story very much! Inventive, erotic, exotic and touching.

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
WONDERFUL

what a wonderful touching story. you are definitely a great story teller

Cody_ThomasCody_Thomasover 17 years ago
Speechless

WOW. Just WOW. This is a wonderful modification on a classic story, I have no other words, just wow, this was incredible, please never stop writing.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 17 years ago
*Tear*

Wow this story had me crying like a baby. I love all the emotions you've wrapped into it.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
nice story

great story sounds a lot like the arabian nights story, i loved the passion.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago

you truly are the best author..

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
oh my, a Scheherazade style story

And you wrote it so well ;) It was breathtaking and lovely and well-done. Especially the secrets.

~Mozzarella

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
best story i have read so far

the story was sweet and well developed, it wasnt completely about sex and it kept me guessing, i guess that was the point. ;-) please keep writting!!!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago

Well done... It's like from a romance novel... I sincerely hope that you show off for the world to see... It's a pity that you have to write it in a porn site... Please hone it and nurture it...

feelinromanticfeelinromanticabout 13 years ago
lovely

a modern twist on arabian nights? Whether that was your inspiration or not i enjoyed very much. Thank you for sharing :o)

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago

Hmm, 1001 Arabian Nights? Interesting.

Your twist on it didn't detract from the beauty of the tale, and your mastery of the language served only to enhance the reality of the story. Well done (:

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
Perfect

couldn't be better. Thanks for sharing.

acepumpsacepumpsover 12 years ago

I really did like the story. Although I do have to offer my constructive criticism. I don't think that most viewers and I like to see that wolves stay in power and what not. I know it isn't the point of the story, but it really got to me.

Other than that, i thoroughly enjoyed this story

Lady_FuryLady_Furyover 12 years ago
Very Endearing

It was a very pleasant read. I was drawn in by the name itself. Quick question, What culture does the name originate or was it just made up? Anyways I love the tales that shows human flaws, makes it more believable since the human race is one overly "flawed" species. Anyways I wish there was some kind of follow up or small continuation to the story. However, it still is a very good read as is. Thank you for writing.

chibicakeschibicakesover 12 years ago
Loved it

This was a very sweet story. Thank you for sharing it.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
:)

Beautiful story especially the end where the wolf-king plays shay's "i will tell you tomorrow" game. :).

timbercat133timbercat133about 12 years ago
Damn!!!

I love reading stories with wolves in them and here in this story you have written a tale worth reading again and again. :) I enjoyed the background story and the continuing of the 'tell you tomorrow' game at the very end. Well written indeed. Please write some more works like this, you have loving fans just waiting to read more. :)

canndcanndabout 11 years ago
GREAT STORY

This was a really good story. I almost wish it could have been longer...that you could extend their story. It was really beautiful. I loved the whole way that the boy dealt with the king and how the king showed mercy that he hadn't shown in years. It was clever how the kid dealt with him and sweet when he explained what his mom had taught him. A bit funny too that he managed to do this for centuries. Sweet HEA ending. I really enjoyed it.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
i know a man who knows someone...

who wrote an entire world around a version of Scheherazade which was awe inspiring and fabulous. and now i know two people who did that, because that story was as fantastic as they come, perfectly proportioned and completely thrilling.

DawnJDawnJalmost 11 years ago
Delightful...

...and delightfully told!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago

I like the One Thousand And One Nights theme.

erotikpassionserotikpassionsover 10 years ago
Wooow!!!

i so love this one...and now its the King's turn to keep his love and mate by his side!

Haphaestion2004Haphaestion2004over 9 years ago
Simply wonderful !!

OMG ! I loooved this story - so much magic, so much love - beautiful, seductive and utterly spellbinding.

Too sexy for words.

I absolutely WILL re-read this story (like all your other writings), because I'm just completely bewitched by it - fascinated ! I nearly expected too hear the genie of the lamp ! Please give us more joyful magic !! :)))

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
OH....MY....GOD

That was.....AMAZING!!! I loved every bit of it! 😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😋😋😋😋😋😋😋👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏💟❤💙💚💛💜💓💕💖💗💘💝💞💟

DomXianDomXianalmost 9 years ago
That was so good!

I like the theme and the idea of the whole story! So creative and I loved the whole thing!

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Wow

Amazing. U created a great sorry in a short length 💝💝💝❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️ It

AmapelliciusAmapelliciusalmost 8 years ago
Praise

Amazing, truly, the ending struck me like a chord, very good story

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Moving

This is much more than an adaptation of a classical story... This feels poetic to my heart.

MarcoSoloMarcoSoloalmost 2 years ago

Truly an amazing story! I hope you have more inside you to let us read!

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