by Shady_Lady
The mixture of taking someone using them through getting the person tipsy was very hot! However that was only the beginning, next you take the victim and readers on a journey of blackmail, control and pure lustful sex. Thank you for the work you put into this story and for sharing it.
I know, I know, it's a story - but spiking a woman's drink is disgusting behavior, especially if you want me to like your protagonist. The horribly choppy grammar & careless sentence structure & phrasing was awfully. distracting, but I could've dealt with that. But a woman who roofies her prey is a turnoff. It's offensive to me as a lesbian & it's despicable behavior.
Luv to be ass fucked bi guys at the door, I once asked a courier delivery guy (South Asian) if he wanted a Blow Job, he asked me to repeat it, which made me hawter, butt he declined and left.
.. wish I could be in her place, with her bunghole plued to my mouth.
This story has zero place in BDSM. It's stories like this that give vanilla people the continued idea that BDSM is abusive. None of this is BDSM at all, instead being rape and blackmail. Nothing wrong with this as fantasy erotica at all, but it belongs in NC/Reluctance category. This is the second story of yours that have been supposed to be BDSM themed, but have just shown you don't know much about it.
Please don't think this is a rant based on your decision to write it this way. I've written a NC/Reluctance story myself, and many have those fantasies. That said, they do have their place.