The mixture of taking someone using them through getting the person tipsy was very hot! However that was only the beginning, next you take the victim and readers on a journey of blackmail, control and pure lustful sex. Thank you for the work you put into this story and for sharing it.
I know, I know, it's a story - but spiking a woman's drink is disgusting behavior, especially if you want me to like your protagonist. The horribly choppy grammar & careless sentence structure & phrasing was awfully. distracting, but I could've dealt with that. But a woman who roofies her prey is a turnoff. It's offensive to me as a lesbian & it's despicable behavior.
English
forbidden heat
The mixture of taking someone using them through getting the person tipsy was very hot! However that was only the beginning, next you take the victim and readers on a journey of blackmail, control and pure lustful sex. Thank you for the work you put into this story and for sharing it.
I know, I know, it's a story - but spiking a woman's drink is disgusting behavior, especially if you want me to like your protagonist. The horribly choppy grammar & careless sentence structure & phrasing was awfully. distracting, but I could've dealt with that. But a woman who roofies her prey is a turnoff. It's offensive to me as a lesbian & it's despicable behavior.
Click here to leave your own comment on this submission! or
Back to The Making of a Slut Ch. 01 or
More submissions by Shady_Lady.