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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous10/13/05

Khufu's pyramid

perhaps...ahh...limestone...as "theblue" said to me...hot coffee in a can...winks...blue

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by duckiesmut10/13/05

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This reads aloud very well, but on the page, it seems to lack punctuation? The last four lines are superb.

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by twelveoone10/13/05

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Ah, a Kaishaku poem that is not about food - I think. Do I need to know, perhaps, I better not, reminds me a little too much
like my life.

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by cward210/16/05

Interesting

Interesting poem. Creates interesting images in the mind when read out

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