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by Anonymous

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by 10/19/05

Hot sex

but you'd think they'd be a little afraid...good story, great imagination. Good luck in the contest.

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by Anonymous10/19/05

I want more.....

erotic halloween stories!!! That was great, Jordanna! You should do one that takes place in a cemetery :) Oh, this is Heather from myspace.....

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by Anonymous10/19/05

Loved it

Great job, sweetie! I loved every moment of it ;)

Kisses,

Meg

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by Anonymous10/19/05

Dark and Sexual

I was startled by your graphic maturbation. It effectively put me back on my erotic heels. Once the roomy came into the picture and then penetration occurred, yoou had me. Good stuff. - David from Dallas

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by Anonymous10/20/05

I love your style!!

I hope you keep writing for all of our reading pleasure. I throughly enjoyed the story. XX Cheri

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by mrcomfy110/21/05

Oh How HOT

Gosh, for a first time submitter you are going to excel. Such hot articulate and graphic images. Sure hope you continue to contribute stories. Had to vote you a 5. First time out is excellent.....WOW!!

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by mrcomfy110/21/05

Oh How HOT

Gosh, for a first time submitter you are going to excel. Such hot articulate and graphic images. Sure hope you continue to contribute stories. Had to vote you a 5. First time out is excellent.....WOW!!

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by Anonymous10/22/05

our fav. groupie

wow our fav. groupie is quite the writter ... your story was really good .... hit us up sometime ..

Dead~Riff
of
Requiem~Within

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by Anonymous10/22/05

sooo hott

wow such great images.....got me a lil wet sittin here reading it...great job ;-)
~dark angel~

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by Anonymous10/22/05

my my have things changed since high school

Well I guess they haven't really, I'm impressed babe, you have a great imagination. xoxoLiz

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by barepusslover10/28/05

Extremely Hot!!! Well Written!!!!!

Very well written for a first time contributor. Please submit more like it!!!! Good Luck in the Contest!!

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