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Devious but delightful
'Twas a well told tale. Thank You. Ronnie W.
Interesting
and, as Ronnie said, devious. I always like to see a nasty person like Susan get her comeuppance. Perhaps they could have done other things to her, such as given her bad breath or acne or something else that would hinder her in her efforts to leech off another man.
Boxlicker101
LOVED IT.......Wow I want more, more, more, more.
What can I say this is GREAT........Loved every line of it :)
Fabulous!
Really good, DP, we need more of your super stories.
Way to go!
Great Fun
Great fun DP - sometimes a wand to make things vanish would be just brilliant.
great
great story I loved it
Fun story
Poor Susan. Someday's it just don't pay to be a scheming, manipulative, seductress. Good work, DP
she got hers
You packed some good sex into this story... Along with some good description of "bad" sex.
Too bad they couldn't all live happily ever after. good job!
Darn...
I started the story and got into it right away and the power went out! The first thing I did was find your story and finish it. Good going and good luck!
Cookie :)
Ok really out there but a great read
How about one with a natural witch not a Hollywood one ( is that the correct term)
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