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End Times?

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by Anonymous

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by sweet GA peaches10/15/05

WOWZA!

and so reality was served
for breakfast, ....

{Salvation's near, it can be yours,
call us now and make your pledge;

so saying says Minister Pat
it's time to pray, and pray alot}.


and payment due in full.
Yes, and I wish I could
just write for a living, ...
so call me and send your
pledge...

very well done Mr. LeBroz,
pray alot, {but send us that pledge}

-sGp-

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by RhymeFairy10/15/05

* Tongue in Cheek *

I lovvveeeee it ~!!!
So as not to step on any toes ...
I love the rythem and your choice in wording here Leon. Just * feels * like your right there in in the middle of it all.
*Grins*
Fun and yet ... telling ~

More Plez ~

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by quasar10/15/05

Staked truths

There is more truth in these words than Mr. Pat could phathom. Shall he call upon the holy ghost to fill his pockets before doom swallows him into the under world.
A very TRUE piece of poetry that I enjoyed. Thank You

Q

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by My Erotic Tale10/15/05

mention

Your poem was mentioned on the thread
"New Poems Reviews"


thanks for the journey....Art~

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by My Erotic Tale10/15/05

mention

Your poem was mentioned on the thread
"New Poems Reviews"


thanks for the journey....Art~

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by The Mutt10/15/05

Ouch

I like this a lot. A lot. Not alot.

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by LeBroz10/16/05

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Edited versions of both little poems have been submitted to remove a typo there and a lot of misspellings here and I pledge to ALWAYS use my spell checker. Shame on me.

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by Bill Dada10/21/05

Ka-ching...

...is the new Amen. Enjoyed the hell out of it, my donation is winging it's way to someones pocket.
ty,bd

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by EmJ038504/11/06

OMG!!!

A television preacher with 'special insight'!!!! Love it!You make it sound like what it is---a protection scheme---'pay me now, I'll save your soul'----riiiiight.

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by KOLKORE12/27/06

When the nightmare is real

Its rhythm is like the foreboding sound of war drums. The image is sinister and dark as can be. Worst of all its totally real. Nowhere to wake up to! At least its humorous (dark of course).

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by BikeNut04/14/07

They're everywhere!!!

Everywhere I go around the country these televangelists follow along on every local station, like gum stuck to my shoes and just as appealing. Billie

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by LeBroz01/30/08

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This poem was mentioned in the Archival Review thread, in a picking through Lit's archive of over 38,500 poems.



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