- All
Comments (2) - Add a
Comment - Send
Feedback Send private anonymous feedback to the author (click here to post a public comment instead).
| Literotica Toy Store ADULT TOY & DVD STORE FAST & DISCREET |
Literotica XXX Webcams 24/7 LIVE CAMS - FREE PREVIEW W/AUDIO! |
Literotica Adult Movies STREAMING ADULT MOVIES PAY PER MINUTE |
English
I'm going to have to wait
to rate this. So far I like the style. But the chapters are just to short and are making it hard to get into the story. After the first two Rea has reached her room and been walked in on while naked, But we don't know who by (most likly Ian). I would have called it short if that had been all in the first chapter. As it is the breaks are making it seem disjointed.
What a great start!
I like the pace you have set and though each installment is one page long, it gives enough information and suspense to keep me wanting more. Great cliffhanger on #2 and can't wait to see where you take them. Keep up the great work!
Click here to leave your own comment on this submission! or
Back to Find Me Ch. 02 or
More submissions by ..Desired...