All Comments on 'Find Me Ch. 02'

to rate this. So far I like the style. But the chapters are just to short and are making it hard to get into the story. After the first two Rea has reached her room and been walked in on while naked, But we don't know who by (most likly Ian). I would have called it short if that had been all in the first chapter. As it is the breaks are making it seem disjointed.

I like the pace you have set and though each installment is one page long, it gives enough information and suspense to keep me wanting more. Great cliffhanger on #2 and can't wait to see where you take them. Keep up the great work!