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For a first effort...
... excellent. The descriptions are very good, there are a few open plot lines that could take the story in a few directions, several good small details, in addition to the unmistakable erotic quality of the story. I was at a loss as to what the main character was wearing for lack of a baseline description though... Good work and keep it up.
Nice start!
For a first submission a very interesting work. It's hooked me enough to be impatient for part 2.
I hope it's in the pipeline.
Live well
Hal
Great start!
Let's see where she goes..
Cool
Great read, just please don't make her evil.
At least not too evil :)
Thanks
Great start!
Looked good to me, and I appreciated that the work had been proofread and brought up to standards.
Sexy story, ripe with opportunities! Mmmm...
next
it was great add the next installment soon
Wow, that was
a very definite winner. You write very well and create very visual erotic imagery. That's worth a ten in my book. Great job.
excellently erotic
So many avenues to explore, so little time.
Keep up the GREAT WORK
Excellent
I am eager to read the next section of the story. This has a lot of possibilities and I am sure you will go wonderful places with this. *grins*
Loved it!
Please write the next chapter soon!
This is great
This is a wonderful start to I hope a long and erotic story. By all means keep going with it as we wait impatiently for the rest of the story.
fantastic!
can't wait for part two!
Looking forward to the next installment
Great awakening story, I especially liked that she was being constantly surprised by what she was thinking. The fact that she originally thought she had a subnormal libido was a nice touch also. Lots of little interest points, I liked it.
Please, sequel?
AWESOME!
Please come out with a sequel very soon. One of the best I've read.
Please, sequel?
AWESOME!
Please come out with a sequel very soon. One of the best I've read.
Sequel please!
Reminds me of that dream where you realize your naked in class... but way better :)
Excellent!
I had a lot of fun reading this, I like how her body seems to be controlling her with its own lust. Go ahead and write the next chapter or two, I can't wait to read them!
Loved It!
Where is the rest???? Keep writing this was HOTHOTHOTHOT!!!
HILARIOUS!
Ha! HA! From innocent schoolgirl, to ultimate self pleasurer to slut! Loved it! That teacher is definately going to notice the change and seduce her ;) Got to laugh at her, because she's so modest and she's acting so unlike herself and her embarssment brings me the giggles! Hilariously sexy! Hell yeah! From a virgin school girl like just like her... Maybe I'm the one opening the door ;)
ready to cum
my cock is throbbing now, pre-cum flowing, I'm ready to cum after reading this...
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