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curious wife always paints such wonderful scenes
I always love reading something new from this author,
such visceral american gothic uncomfortable moments that don't let you go.
I always seem to hunger for more detail, but what I think is really awesome is how, when I read the piece there are simultainous pictures of different times painted in my mind. just like life. really cool!!!
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Live and learn. This is good poetry, Curious. It reminds me of something that happened to me. Be careful of those "ings" in free verse. We want to try to kill those suckers. It's not always easy, is it? :)
Thanks for the read.
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I can just see you standing tall and proud, cherishing your mistake.
I sorta kinda made a mistake
along the same lines....don't miss that lake a bit...or the library...sighs...
will ring true....
for many, thanks for this "right on" take of one aspect of the human condition.
I liked the last line
Really liked this! Sometimes good comes from bad.
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