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by Anonymous

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by cward210/16/05

Cool

What a great poem. Simple but effective. I loved the image you pianted in this poem. Sensuous, rich and delicate. Nice one.

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by LeBroz01/09/07

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Simple, sensuous, steamy...

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by LeBroz01/28/07

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This poem was mentioned in the Archival Review thread, in a picking through Lit's archive of over 34,000 poems.



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by duddle14602/01/07

Love

A little snippet having to do with a thing called love.

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by Anonymous05/02/12

I seriously love how you slice the lines in your poems. You just break everything up, and it should come off choppy but instead it's really organic and raw.

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