All Comments on 'Special Friend'

My special friend stands there now,

eyes looking back at me.

Holding gazes locked in time

waiting for our dream.

This was a lovely ending. Without consistent meter in the poem, I thought it flowed along smoothly. Be careful of commas that aren't needed. I believe the line breaks were good enough for a pause if that's why you were using them. You put out a very good poem.

Thanks for the read.

After such a long day, it's nice to set down to such a nice read.

That time, space, and distance cannot rip asunder. How beautiful. Thank You. Ronnie W.