- All
Comments (20) - Add a
Comment
| Literotica Toy Store ADULT TOY & DVD STORE FAST & DISCREET |
Literotica XXX Webcams 24/7 LIVE CAMS - FREE PREVIEW W/AUDIO! |
Literotica Adult Movies STREAMING ADULT MOVIES PAY PER MINUTE |
| Literotica Toy Store ADULT TOY & DVD STORE FAST & DISCREET |
Literotica XXX Webcams 24/7 LIVE CAMS - FREE PREVIEW W/AUDIO! |
Literotica Adult Movies STREAMING ADULT MOVIES PAY PER MINUTE |
English
In touch again...
Hi Michelle
A reaaly exicting and exotic story - a big turn on for us girls. Try an exhib one next, please, please, please
Liza
Good for first time story
Good start for a first time writer...however reading your story and looking at your pic...I see a fat and ugly cow who is desperate ...so swinging would be your style... cause desperate guys always need a spittoon for their droppings.
And leave poor rick alone...
Rick
Great first time story.
Love to hear more. Love your picture. I can just see you with these guys. Please continue. Andy
what a fantastic fuck
hi love your first story. fantastic story and great bit of writing, do hope you are going to do a follow up to this story well done you jim.
Love your story
Wish I could have been there helping you.
Theresa
Good story
Keep writing what you want to. Ignore Rick's comments, he's sitting behind his keyboard whacking off because swingers won't let assholes like him into our parties.
a bit more character
It was intereesting once the action got going, but I think you should have put in more about your thoughts before the 'party'. I think most women would go threw a lot of soul-searching before taking this step. Or was your husband suggesting something you secretly wanted yourself? The problem is that your motivations are absent most of the story.
but it had the feeling of reality, partiuclarly with the 2 losers who pawed you early on.
Wow...talk about insecurites...
keep it up..LOL
not bad
Good reading, very hot.
The typos are a bit distracting, you might want to double check your spelling next time.
Not bad.....
Could have been a bit more mystifying and erotic by letting the first two guys fingerfuck you to completion before the big nigga guy took you to one side and tried to impregnate you.
C'mon you got to be kidding
This story is so unrealistic..no "proper" women who has had no prior acquaintance with the world of swinging is going to walk into a party and start fucking right off the bat especially if her husband had to coerce her into going in the first place. Most wives in this situation go looking for their husbands and stick close by his side, holding his hand for protection. Only after they have done some swinging as a couple would she be loosened up enough to go out on her own at a party. I have seen it happen time and time again at the swinger's parties that I attend and it seldom varies.
Pretty Good......
Good story....Been to a swingers club before and it's not quite like that but hell aren't stories all fantasy anyway? BTW, Love your picture.
Nice to see one of your stories on Lit
Hi Michelle,
Nice to finally see one of your stories on this site. Too bad Kumbaby's Korner shut down. I miss that site terribly. It seems that most of the people who "slam" authors with their comments never have any stories posted. Keep 'em cumming, baby.
You know who
Inspiring Ending
The story is simply great, wonderful and realistic. But the ending is superb with two mind blowing conversations :
"If you don't come now I am going to leave you here." Rick warned.
"Good night dear, don't wait up!" I smiled as I felt another orgasm growing.
The age old sentiment is rightly echoed that no moral binding can dictate when the enjoyment is at its peak. Bravo, madam. It’ll surely inspire many housewives to be cock-loving whore like your Michelle and drink life to the lees.
Keep them cumming!
While somewhat unbelievable, you tale 'SWINGING' was my idea of what 'erotic fantasy' should be. I look forward to reading many more adventures of Michelle so keep them cumming!
CUMBABY, don't take the nasty comments of Rick to heart. He probably didn't like leaving his wife behind at a Swingers Party especially since he obviously gets no action being a "Rick with an average dick" LOL.
LET`S FUCKING SWING!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1
I LOVE YOUR NAME. CUMBABY`S PICTURE GAVE ME A HARD-ON BEFORE I EVEN STARTED THE STORY.
GREAT STORY. MY WIFE AND I HAVE ATTENDED PARTIES AND SOME MREALLY WERE JUST AS YOUR STORY DESCRIBED. WHEN WE WANTED TO FUCK WE WANTED TO START EARLY AND , OF COURSE, THAT WAS WHY WE WERE THERE.
ANYWAY, IF SOMEONE DOESN`T LIKE YOUR STORY THAT IS THEIR PROBLEM. i LIKED IT AND I PLAYED WITH A HOT HARD PRICK ALL THE WAY THROUGH. AND WILL CONTINUE WHEN I FINISH THIS.
I HOPE YOU WRITE MORE. i LOVE YOUR PICTURE. DO YOU HAVE MORE? IF YOU LIKE TO CHAT YOU CAN GET ME AT sfdom81@yahoo.com KEEP THE STORIES CUMMING CUMBABY
Are you for real???
if it really is a true story than I must admit, it's an excellent story. I would love to read more.
nice......
wow cumbaby that was hot, and I like the fact that you just let it all hang out. Damn, would love to see a cumslut like yourself in action. I'd be one beat off mother fucker watching you take mutipul cocks, go home, HONEY IM HERE TO WATCH:) THANKS for your story, i knew there was a reason i keep "cumming" back to this place.
Good reading!
Too bad that niggah didn't shoot you full of his baby-makers to meet with your eggs in your ovulating time.
Great Story
A very nice story and very well paced.A sequel to it wud be interesting.
Click here to leave your own comment on this submission! or
Back to Swinging or
More submissions by Cumbaby.