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by Anonymous

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by sack10/17/05

I'm chuckling.....

at your effortless wit! Neat little poem!

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by Anonymous10/17/05

Yeah...

it's clever! A wonderful metaphor, CW.

A Fly

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by twelveoone10/18/05

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too short for much of comment, just like it, alot

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by cymry10/18/05

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Very clever!
"God, you're worse than me."
So few words, so much to say!

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by dcpoet4410/22/05

love it.......

need i say more........don

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by LeBroz12/10/06

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Fascinating metaphor with a twist.

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by Amyfriend01/25/07

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Cute and clever use of words

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