by storm101
This is an excellent story very sexy, I find myself waiting to hear more and waiting for the next chapter or segment, it was very good.
That was a very good first story. You have an economy of words while at the same time painting a very vivid picture. Thaks for sharing it with us.
damn, i wish my first experience was that good. well i mean, it was pretty good, but you know what i mean.
That is a fucking good story. I wish I was Ivy then. Laura sounds like a hot pussy.