All Comments on 'Further Adventures of the Maid Ch. 01'

When Jack and Mary left the manor house I felt that the story was rushed to a conclusion. But I now see a number of possibilities for story development. It could be interesting to see the Baroness and her husband Philip reconnect emotionally again as Philip plans and helps her submission to Thomas. A collared Baroness waiting to serve the slaver Thomas, with Philip assisting and watching, as she is drawn into her husband's escapades is captivating. I imagine that Thomas would be using Mary again, in front of Jack. I imagine that Betsey would be claimed by the slaver and sold at auction. Eventually Victoria would be turned out as a slave, maybe forced by her slave mother. I am looking forward to this story's development.

i was so happy to see another addition to the story and very glad you decided to continue on. Although it seemed the story stopped so quickly i know it takes alot to write as quickly as you did. Thank you for your submission so quickly in this story...can't wait to read on. respectfully fan in Texas. naynay

Great to see the return of Mary, looking forward to her continuing adventures.

Count me in as one of the fans