All Comments on 'Staying After Class'

I hope that you will soon be adding to this story. You have me hooked don't just leave me tangling there. I like the build up and how you left it.

Nice lead-in! You really should follow up on this story!

Very nice teaser. The words were so colorful and imaginative. I can't wait for the story to continue.

Kittn

Now i gotta go read the next part.....very descriptive....love your use of visuals. - shorty