All Comments on 'Epitomize Please That Walker'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
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you know, this poem is whacked! I like how you turn phrases inside out, leaving a dissonance-- makes me uncomfortable, but the kind of discomfort that makes me want to read it again. Not sure exactly what you were going for on some of this, but I loved the last line especially:

"Gussy embroidery picks you up

For the drive

Home."

I mean, no one has ever said that before.

as

My Erotic TaleMy Erotic Taleover 18 years ago
sensuall

playing with my mind in words decorated in a sensuall way <grin> nice write

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