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River Nymph

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by Anonymous

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by twelveoone10/18/05

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it has its moments good and bad, this one bad:
"in wet sensual metaphor"
explain "metaphor"

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by LeBroz10/19/05

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A magically mystical picture of the elusive river nymph.

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by LuciousBi-Writes4U10/19/05

good...

different...but good. ;)
hugs,
T

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by Anonymous10/20/05

I sorta kinda

like this line


for a man of the woods
to wrap his love
in wet sensual metaphor

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