All Comments on 'Appalachian Trail'

by annaswirls

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twelveoonetwelveooneover 18 years ago
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and ribbons of light blue memories

this line stikes me, at first it seems out of place - it isn't. you seem to do that, it is always a challege, worthwhile

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Snake bitten

Some really clever use of language, here! A delightful trip down the trail, Anna, thanks for taking me along.

Fly

sacksackover 18 years ago
loved the subtle imagery.....

Have you ever actually hiked the AT?

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
yes

I have hiked it many times-- pieces of it actually not the whole thang. :)

the whole chipmunk attack I only saw in photos from my little brothers camera in H.S.

the rest is just invented of course...

you?

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
I loved this

You really have a way of making the moment come alive.

Curiouswife

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Confused Twaddle

Fright on the Appalachian Trail? Bovine scatology. Only a wimpy, unstable mind could come up with stuff like this. Learn how to write clearly. It might help with your day job too.

RhymeFairyRhymeFairyover 18 years ago
Picturesque ~

Anna,

I soo get this. I too write like this at times. It is great to be able to let go and just write what you see ... feel. I have hiked a lotta trails and this happens a lot, eh~ Your imagery is great, a lil funny and sweet too.

I like it, thats all I'm saying. *grins.

LeBrozLeBrozover 17 years ago
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Excellent aural photograph, when read aloud;

And as for your eunuch critic, well, his shortcomings are obvious.

LeBrozLeBrozover 17 years ago
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Excellent aural photograph, when read aloud;

And as for your eunuch critic, well, his shortcomings are obvious.

duddle146duddle146about 17 years ago
Alive

Apprehension on the Appalachian Trail. Lovely references to nature in the raw.

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