You made my cock feel so good, I'd almmost read it again to cumm. I didn't not find any mistakes w/ your use of the languange, and you seem to me, an educated writer.
thank you for an exciting story.
Rudy
by
Anonymous10/22/05
Impressive!
I'd better go read the other 3!
Has he got her preg?
Lukas
by
Anonymous12/12/05
You make me want to be a better reader!
You had me at "Take off your costume". You have an uncanny ability to give your characters just the right amount of sexual prowess, while still appearing to be timid. What a great mind you have for things sexual, and probably the body to make them work orgasmically.
English
Worth the effort
You made my cock feel so good, I'd almmost read it again to cumm. I didn't not find any mistakes w/ your use of the languange, and you seem to me, an educated writer.
thank you for an exciting story.
Rudy
Impressive!
I'd better go read the other 3!
Has he got her preg?
Lukas
You make me want to be a better reader!
You had me at "Take off your costume". You have an uncanny ability to give your characters just the right amount of sexual prowess, while still appearing to be timid. What a great mind you have for things sexual, and probably the body to make them work orgasmically.
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