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"like the earth is reaching
To kiss a cloud"
I have a difficult time with end rhyme that falls into predictability. However I really like this line! I had to read the poem twice to put it together, with the verse change inbetween. Those enjambments get me every time :)
as
like cotton candy clouds
amid the cluster green mountains..it may have been said before...but ,,not by
U>...UBOK...blue
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ZMA you know I love ZMPS but I don't see the ZEN in this one? I am not smart. -Scotty
:)
good job!
T ;)
I Believe ..
"like the earth is reaching
To kiss a cloud"...
original in content,
and I love the thought,
planted here,
like a seed ..
and left a new breath
between the lines,
and me.
.......breathe........
-sGp-
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