All Comments on 'Succubus'

fantastic work. extremely well-written, fine grasp of mythology, great story. please keep it coming.

long winded but once you got through the first few paragraphs, the story was pretty amazing. You have a nice way with words when you settle down into it. Fantasitic job. It's hard to write erotic horror without making it too much, this was just about right.

Great job. This is great not only on this site, but as a piece of fiction anywhere. You have a beautiful way with words, and this is one of my new favorite pieces, among erotica and among normal short stories as well.

Would love to read more stories by this author.

Unrealistic. Well, it's an erotic horror stories and those are always unrealistic, but in this case I meant the mythology was false. Zeus never created humans - in fact, he hated them. He loves beautiful women, so you were right about Hera's revenge, but her revenge was against women, not men. Still, a good story.

I stumbled upon your tale while doing research for an Erotic Horror blog post. You have a new fan. This was beautifully written, and hauntingly, graphically horrifying. At some points, I didn't know if I could go on reading, just from the sheer detail of description...but I'm glad I did. There is a poetry to your horror writing and I do hope you keep doing it. Have you published anything? If not, you should.