All Comments on 'Halloween Dress-up'

This is so well written I wish I could add more than 5 stars. The passion between the two, and the pent up tension due to the relationship were well developed and easily felt by the reader. Excellent!

Not that I believed for a second that she used a belt and successfully tied his hands. But when she released his hands he would have been out the door and down the road. She was slightly drunk and he would have known this whole thing was a train wreck waiting to happen. Too implausible, even for fiction. A waste of space.

You are such a kill joy. I wonder if you are the same "anonymous" that rags all the stories here? Anyway it is just a STORY. Loosen up and enjoy! I bet you never enjoyed "Peter Pan", "Star Wars", or ghost stories around the camp fire either. Always finding faults, looking for reality. So sad. I guess it is true. Reality is for people with no imagination. Perhaps you should quit reading Literotica and stick with the news feeds.

Good descriptive imagery and development. Please keep your imagination open and increasing your imagery. I look forward for more of your erotica.

Great story. Build up was good and characters believable. Tell Anonymous to sit on the carrot she was talking about. Keep writing.

This was just way too unbelievable. Even for fiction. And I loved Star Wars. But it always bothered me the Darth was the Father! This story was just laughably bad.

Another British degenerate and talentless wimp (aren't they all ?) present its pathetic attempt at a story. How sad. "1*" !

Ok for a quickie, but there are better stories and better writing elsewhere.

See Kala and Theresa.

Are you kidding me! This story was great. Young love feeling there oats. I would love to take a girls virginity like this and yes I would dress up for her. Your writing is great too.

Keep going. There is more to this tale and I can hardly wait to see how Raggedy Ann and Andy join the party.

Love to be made the maid!!!

How sweet!!

I got lost with the dick on the Butler. But would gladly read more in another chapter.

I'm just cuming to the end of page one, but I had to take a break to let you know that I think that you are a phenomenal writer/editor. All too often I give up on a story after the first few paragraphs because it reads like the author never finished middle school. Your style and expressiveness is masterful to say the least. Thank you so much!

A great story, told very well. The vivid sexy imagery got me very turned on. Love your imagination. Please please keep writing your sensual, sexy, wonderful stories. Xxx

While reading this I felt like a "fly on the wall"." It was perfect! I can't wait to see if you'll write a sequel that brings Ragedy Ann & Andy into the action. With your skills as a writer, the possibilities are endless.

Loved, it, this story is just dying for a sequel though!

Don't believe the negative comments you did a great story.

Great story. Loved seeing crossdressing in positive sensual way. That is so rare in the genre. Loved it. Love your description & story telling. Keep having fun with your writing! Thank you so much for sharing it with us!

Where is the sequal?

I agree with Jenna2641. I love when a female treats her boyfriend like this. You are a great writer and I hope there will be another chapter.

Great story. Uncommon in this genre, since it is usually a forced feminisation or a shemale or the story of a female born in a male body.

This has that role play game involved (more Kinky), which makes it extra sexy. Certainly not the typical first time for a couple, but, why not.

Loved it. I’ll check for other of your stories... keep writing

I loved your story. Great detail and very sexy. Made me jealous of him

Man I would love to read what happens next

I've read this story 3 or 4 times and I love it. Each time I wet my panties so much I have to go all the way. I loved it. Thank you for sharing it.

I loved your store

I just love a man who grabs my head and face fucks me until he gives me his nectar

Really great story Loved the content.

Would have liked them making it to the party and having fun there also then more again afterwards.

Great job

Thank you, loved the story. I've often dreamed of doing that with childhood neighbor girlfriend.

LOVED this story!

That was certainly and exciting read!

This is a totally amazing story and I definitely want to read more of your stories. Especially the next story that follows this one.