All Comments  for

Guillotine

bydarkgoddess2478©
All
Comments (6)
by Anonymous

If the above comment contains any ads, links, or breaks Literotica rules, please report it.
by sack11/07/05

definitely macabre.....

please don't write a sequel....LOL!

If the above comment contains any ads, links, or breaks Literotica rules, please report it.
by Faustienne11/09/05

Lovely dark

Great poem! Very nice dark mood. Like the drawing, too.
(To previous commenter: psst, poems doesn't usually have sequels...)

If the above comment contains any ads, links, or breaks Literotica rules, please report it.
by f-cynyr11/09/05

interesting.

i found the poem stirring and quite interesting, that unnecessary emotions are such a threat, and . i also liked the reflective separation of self, questioning is it worth it. . only you can answer that for your self. nice drawing ,complimented the poem well.

If the above comment contains any ads, links, or breaks Literotica rules, please report it.
by duddle14612/25/06

Careful

Tread carefully ~ our relationship is in jeopardy ~ all it takes is one slip to destroy it. Nicely illustrated with a drawing of a Guillotine. In the hurt of reality lurks an ever present danger.

If the above comment contains any ads, links, or breaks Literotica rules, please report it.
by LeBroz02/03/07

~~

A metaphorical kill can be worse than the real kind.

If the above comment contains any ads, links, or breaks Literotica rules, please report it.
by tazz31701/21/12

A FRENCH ANSWER

to a painless suicide. TK U MLJ LV NV

If the above comment contains any ads, links, or breaks Literotica rules, please report it.

Click here to leave your own comment on this submission!  or
Back to Guillotine  or
More submissions by darkgoddess2478.

Add a
Comment

Post a public comment on this submission (click here to send private anonymous feedback to the author instead).

Post comment as (click to select):

You may also listen to a recording of the characters.

Preview comment

Forgot your password?

Please wait

Change picture

Your current user avatar, all sizes:

Default size User Picture  Medium size User Picture  Small size User Picture  Tiny size User Picture

You have a new user avatar waiting for moderation.

Select new user avatar:

   Cancel