All Comments on 'Michael Fucks Two Older Women'

They didn't give him any advice! Guess there's going to have to be a sequel where they show the girlfriend how to relax.

Pretty hot stuff.

i read all of your stories. i cant think of anyone who has ever put as many stupid pieces of writing on this web. i dont really think you have ever come closer than your hand to getting off.

Good premise, horribly poor execution

If the sex scene wasn't so rushed, with minimal detail. A slow seduction/undressing of him by the two women might have been more erotic, as well as more specific detail in the too short sex scene itself.

Makes the story sound like it's being written by an eighth-grader. Or a comic book author. Which, emotionally speaking, would be approximately equivalent.

Dont listen to the lynch mob. Keep on writing!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!