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Hot................
This story is so so so hot, my pussy is burning from just masturbating. Keep the stories cumming............
Way too short!
How am I supposed to get into the story, when it's over in ten paragraphs? Please people, rather than producing a multi-part short story, flesh it out a little, and give us a chance to climax!
Length
Great story, but it needed to be longer
A bit short
It was good but the story was very short. The sex part of the story only lasted about 2 or 3 paragraphs.
Still it was good.
Short story
i was in the story and it ended it needs to be a bit longer next time
Very Good, what there WAS of it, NEway.
Please extend your wtitten submissions so that I can do more than acheive Erection, Col. I love how it was going, but then they fell asleep!
Dammit.
The part that you submitted is very nice, though. The encounter needed 2 last longer, however! Perhaps more detailed descriptions of the characters' bodies would help. I mean its nice that you fancy Big knockers, but a bit more description of the REST of their bodies would help enormously! I, personally, like tits I can fot into my hand or mouth. More seems like a big waste, 2 ME! I mean: I KNOW that there R some guys, including yourself, who think that Breasts the size of Texas would B swell, but that is just nonsense 2 me. The erotic content was superb, however!
those ladies ought 2 get 2gether again 4 a more extended session, U know! One that provides more than a stiffy 4 me, you see.
:p
tastes GR8, Less Filling too!
Yum, pussy.
pussy soaked
my pussy is squirting everywhere
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