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Painted Underpass

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by Anonymous

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by LeBroz10/20/05

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a vivid graffiti image...

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by My Erotic Tale10/20/05

your perspective...

illuminates! A playground of colored words (~_~)

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by impressive10/21/05

Very nice!

An enjoyable read. Impressive enjambment. ~Imp

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by dcpoet4410/22/05

nice drive thru...

and it makes me think of some of the ones i've come across......nicely done......don

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by WhiteWarlock10/29/05

Not Bad

Painting with words...

I have seen you write better Sweetone

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by darkerdreamer05/11/07

you have

made pieces I like more than this, but the imagery is inescapable, like an illustrated book for children, the picture is vibrant and dazzling... I love that. Wish I could see the graffiti that inspired this.

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